Topic of Essay- How the unique charcter traits of Friar Lawrence, Romeo, and Juliet play a role in helping the tragedy ensue.
Introduction
Lead- The charcters in Romeo and Juliet are very well developed and complex.
Thesis- Juliet's, Romeo's and Friar Lawrence's personaities and unique traits contribute a lot to the tragedy that ensues.
Body Paragraph 1
Topic Sentence- Friar Lawrence is a very helpful and unique individual.
1. Friar Lawrence knew about Romeo's arranged marriage, Rosaline, and he was supposed to marry them very soon. Even though he knew about this arranged marriage, he agreed to help Romeo marry Juliet for the sake of love.
Body Paragraph 2
Topic Sentence- Juliets' desires and tendency to be overdramatic helps the story unfold in a very intresting way that makes you want to never put the book down.
1. Juliet usually got her way in the book and when she was anxious or nervous or excited she was very dramatic about it, not like people are today.
Body Paragraph 3
Topic Sentence- Romeo's role is very important in this play because he is one of the main reasons that the play turns out the way that it does.
Conclusion
Sum up and make connections to modern world.
My responses to books and my thoughts on other 8th graders responses to their books.
Wednesday, April 24, 2013
Thursday, April 18, 2013
Reading Response
I recently started reading the book "The Wednesday Wars," by Gary D. Schmidt. It is about a seventh grade boy named Holling Hoodhood who belives that his teacher, Mrs. Baker, hates him and is always plotting something against him. He thinks that she hates him because he is presbyterian, and he attend temple or church. In the very beginning of the story, Mrs. Baker was a little bit mean to Holling. She always made him clap erasers on Wednesdays after school when half of the class was at Hebrew school and the other half was at Catholic school. Now, she is actually being pretty nice to him, and rewards him with cream puffs on Wednesday afternoons if he does a good job on his chore. For some strange reason, Holling thinks that this is just a weird, twisted method that Mrs. Baker is using to munipulate him and that she is plotting something against him. I don't think that this is true.
I think that Mrs. Baker didn't like Holling at first because she didn't understand him and she thought that it was strange that he had no religion. I think that now that she's gotten to know him better, she likes him more. Why else would she give him a cream puff, but not the other thirty students in the class? I don't understand why Holling is so uptight about Mrs. Baker not liking him. She's his teacher! Not his best friend or his family who kind-of have to like him.
I conclusion, this is a very good book so far. I highly recommend it for anyone who is looking for a good book to read.
I think that Mrs. Baker didn't like Holling at first because she didn't understand him and she thought that it was strange that he had no religion. I think that now that she's gotten to know him better, she likes him more. Why else would she give him a cream puff, but not the other thirty students in the class? I don't understand why Holling is so uptight about Mrs. Baker not liking him. She's his teacher! Not his best friend or his family who kind-of have to like him.
I conclusion, this is a very good book so far. I highly recommend it for anyone who is looking for a good book to read.
Wednesday, March 20, 2013
Non-Fiction Reading Response
I just read the article called "To Save a Life, a Tug of War With the Earth," by Mark Santora and Matt Flegenheimer. It is about a group of heroic New York City firefighters who rescued a construction worker who fell into a gaping hole while building a new subway line. After he fell, he wasn't able to get out. He was stuck there for many hours while the firefighters and other construction workers dug him out.
The man was waist-deep in muck about 100 feet below the streets. It took a backhoe, a lot of firefighters, a lot of rope, and a giant griphoist machine to remove the man from the ground.
" 'It was a hell hole,' said Lt. Rafael Goyenechea, a paramedic who quickly reached the worker and stayed by his side for more than four hours. 'I was definitely worried throughout about possible drowning.' "
I think that it's really good that they were able to get the construction worker out of the hole. It was also great that nobody was hurt throughout the process.
The man was waist-deep in muck about 100 feet below the streets. It took a backhoe, a lot of firefighters, a lot of rope, and a giant griphoist machine to remove the man from the ground.
" 'It was a hell hole,' said Lt. Rafael Goyenechea, a paramedic who quickly reached the worker and stayed by his side for more than four hours. 'I was definitely worried throughout about possible drowning.' "
I think that it's really good that they were able to get the construction worker out of the hole. It was also great that nobody was hurt throughout the process.
Thursday, March 7, 2013
Reading Response
I am currently reading the book A Corner of the Universe, by Ann Martin. This book is about a twelve year old girl named Hattie who's entire life changes when her uncle Adam comes to town. But Adam isn't like other people. Despite the fact thats he's 21, he has mental problems and cannot control himself. Hattie has never met Adam before, and she didn't even know that he existed. The first time that she even heard his name was when her parents told her that his special school was closing and that he was moving into town to live with her grandparents.
When Adam moves into the small town of Millerton, people don't want to deal with him and his mental problems.
What I think will happen later on in the book is that people in Millerton will eventually learn to accept him for who he is.
\In conclusion, this book is about a girl named Hattie whos life changes drastically when her uncle with mental problems moves to town and I think that eventually people will learn to accept him.
When Adam moves into the small town of Millerton, people don't want to deal with him and his mental problems.
What I think will happen later on in the book is that people in Millerton will eventually learn to accept him for who he is.
\In conclusion, this book is about a girl named Hattie whos life changes drastically when her uncle with mental problems moves to town and I think that eventually people will learn to accept him.
Wednesday, February 20, 2013
Reading Response
I recently started reading the book, Million Dollar Throw, by Mike Lupica. This book is about a thirteen year old boy named Nate Brodie, (nicknamed Brady-- after Tom Brady), who is a football quarterback in New England. In this book, Brady gets the chance of a lifetime when he wins a contest sponsored by a chain of sports stores known as SportStuff. The winner of the contest gets a chance to attempt to throw a football through a twenty inch ring from thirty yards away during haf-time at an NFL game. Winning this contest is about as likely as winning the lottery, but Brady actually won.
Brady's family is poor and could really use the million dollars that Brady may or may not be able to win. His father recently lost his job, his mother is working two jobs, and the Brodie's are in danger of losing their house. Brady is a fantastic quarterback and he is confident that he can make the throw, but as time goes on and it gets closer and closer to the big day, Brady starts to lose his proffessional touch.
I think that Brady will be able to make the throw because he is a really good football player and he appears to always be very confident and self-motivated. Also, Brady seems like a good kid and he probably just wants to make his family, friends, (especially his best friend and next door neighbor, Abby), coach, and his inspiration, Tom Brady, proud of him. As a result, I think that this will make him practice a lot and work really hard so that he will be able to make the million dollar throw.
In conclusion, I think that Brady will make the throw and win one million dollars because he is a good kid who is both confident and self-motivated.
Brady's family is poor and could really use the million dollars that Brady may or may not be able to win. His father recently lost his job, his mother is working two jobs, and the Brodie's are in danger of losing their house. Brady is a fantastic quarterback and he is confident that he can make the throw, but as time goes on and it gets closer and closer to the big day, Brady starts to lose his proffessional touch.
I think that Brady will be able to make the throw because he is a really good football player and he appears to always be very confident and self-motivated. Also, Brady seems like a good kid and he probably just wants to make his family, friends, (especially his best friend and next door neighbor, Abby), coach, and his inspiration, Tom Brady, proud of him. As a result, I think that this will make him practice a lot and work really hard so that he will be able to make the million dollar throw.
In conclusion, I think that Brady will make the throw and win one million dollars because he is a good kid who is both confident and self-motivated.
Wednesday, February 13, 2013
Reading Response due 2/14
The book "Don't Eat This Book," by Morgan Spurlock is about "Fast food and the supersizing of America." In the first few chapters, I learned about obesity in America and how big of a problem it has become. According to the book, the United States is the fattest countryin the world. 65% of all adults in the United States are overweight and 30% are obese. Many companies have now had to start making extra-large, reinforced car seats, huge chairs, and even "super-heavy-duty" bathroom scales. Morgan was on a journey to show people the effects of fast food on a persons health. He ate only McDonalds food for thirty days which was documented in his documentary "Super Size Me."
According to this book, school lunch is partially to blame for kids being overweight or obese. School lunch is usually a variety of fattening and unhealthy foods. There is pizza, mac and cheese, french fries, cinnamon buns, snack cakes, chips, sugary drinks... it's a big buffet of bad for you foods. *
In this book, the author wants to get everybody thinking about how they should eat and possibly even convince them to change their diets. I think that Morgan made his point in a very interesting way by eating McDonalds for thirty straight days. It is really different than just writing a book about it and expecting people to read it and become informed. He experienced the fattieness first hand. He also wrote this book in first person so he is talking directly to the reader which makes it all that much more interesting.
In conclusion, "Don't Eat This Book," by Morgan Spurlock, is a really good book that tells the true story of how fast food can effect Americans.
According to this book, school lunch is partially to blame for kids being overweight or obese. School lunch is usually a variety of fattening and unhealthy foods. There is pizza, mac and cheese, french fries, cinnamon buns, snack cakes, chips, sugary drinks... it's a big buffet of bad for you foods. *
In this book, the author wants to get everybody thinking about how they should eat and possibly even convince them to change their diets. I think that Morgan made his point in a very interesting way by eating McDonalds for thirty straight days. It is really different than just writing a book about it and expecting people to read it and become informed. He experienced the fattieness first hand. He also wrote this book in first person so he is talking directly to the reader which makes it all that much more interesting.
In conclusion, "Don't Eat This Book," by Morgan Spurlock, is a really good book that tells the true story of how fast food can effect Americans.
Thursday, January 17, 2013
Reading Response
Who has the power in this text?
In the book Chinese Cinderella, by Adeline Yen Mah, the people that have the most power are the adults, mainly her stepmother, Niang. The other three people that have the most power are her grandparents, Ye Ye and Nai Nai, and her father.
Her stepmother Niag is in charge of everyone and everything in this book. She is very controlling and makes all of the plans for the family, which usually exclude her five stepchildren, who she despises. Her grandparents only use their "powers" to get a meal or some hot water, and her father mostly just goes along with whatever Niang says to keep hef happy.
In conclusion, the people that have most of the power in this book are the adults, especially Niang, Adeline's stepmother.
In the book Chinese Cinderella, by Adeline Yen Mah, the people that have the most power are the adults, mainly her stepmother, Niang. The other three people that have the most power are her grandparents, Ye Ye and Nai Nai, and her father.
Her stepmother Niag is in charge of everyone and everything in this book. She is very controlling and makes all of the plans for the family, which usually exclude her five stepchildren, who she despises. Her grandparents only use their "powers" to get a meal or some hot water, and her father mostly just goes along with whatever Niang says to keep hef happy.
In conclusion, the people that have most of the power in this book are the adults, especially Niang, Adeline's stepmother.
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