Revised Reading Response for Blog Post #5

   In my independent reading book, The Diary of Anne Frank, by Anne Frank, did Anne ever get used to life in hiding? When the Frank's first went into hiding, Anne was having a hard time getting used to her new way of life. She couldn't make a lot of noise and had to be very still so that she wouldn't accidently make a floor board creak. At the point that I am currently up to in the book, Anne, her family, the VanDaan's, and Mr. Dussell have been hiding in the secret annex for approximately two years. Anne wishes for nothing but freedom, but at the same time she has adjusted to her new life and daily routine. She is used to getting up early, being very still and quiet all day, and eating whatever she was served without a complaint, even if she didn't particularly like the food that was being served.
   In the beginning of the book, Anne was having a hard time getting used to being trapped in the annex. It was very small, secluded, and lonely. Anne and her family couldn't make a lot of noise because they were afraid that the warehouse staff might hear them and turn them into the Nazi's. She also couldn't open the curtains or turn on any lights because they were afraid that the neighbors would see them. On top of all that, they had very few visitors. For example, one of the few visitors that they had were Mr. Klienman, one of the office staff who had agreed to take in Jews in need of a safe hiding place. These conditions were hard for Anne to get used to because she was used to because before the Nazi's invaded Germany, Anne was free to do pretty much whatever she wanted, such as going to the neighborhood playground to play with her friends. Now she is basically a prisoner who hadn't done anything to deserve a punishment.
   In the middle of the book, Anne is used to her daily routine and what she is aloud and not aloud to do. She wishes for the hard times for Jewish people to come to an end so that she go bsck to living the life that she once took for granted. I feel bad for Anne in this situation because there is no way that I could be quiet and still for two years! I also feel bad for her because all that she can do for entertainment is study, read, and write in her diary, plus I don't think that I could live on the food that they ate.
   In conclusion, in the beginning of the book, Anne was having a hard time getting used to life in the annex, but towards the middle of the book, she has learned to accept her new way of life, and prays for the Jews suffering to end soon. I hope that in the end of the book, Anne will look back at her life in hiding and see it as more of an adventure than a punishment.

Blog Post #5: Independent Reading Book

           In my independent reading book, The Diary of Anne Frank, by Anne Frank, did Anne ever get used to life in hiding? In the beginning of the story, Anne was having a little bit of a hard time getting used to being trapped in the annex. She had to be vey quiet all the time and couldn't move around very much. At the point that I am at in the book now, Anne, her family, the Van Daan's, and Mr. Dussell have been hiding in the secret annex for approximately two years. Now, Anne wants nothing more than to get out of the annex and be free again, but she is also used to this environment and her daily routine.She is used to getting up early, sitting around and writing in her diary or reading all day, and eating whatever she is served without complaining, even if the food served is not a favorite of hers.
           In the beginning of the book, Anne was having a hard time getting used to life in the annex. It was very small and secluded. Anne couldn't make a lot of noise because the Frank's were afraid that the warehouse staff would hear them and turn them in. She also couldn't open the curtains or turn on any lights because they were afraid that the neighbors would see them. On top of all of that, they didn't have very many visitors. For example, one of the few people to visit the Jews hiding up in the annex was Mr. Kleinman, one of the office staff. These conditions were hard for Anne to get used to because before the Nazi's invaded Germany, Anne was free to do pretty much whatever she wanted, such as go to the park and play with her friends. Now she is basically a prisoner.
           At the point in the book that I am up to now, Anne is used to life in the annex, but wishes for the hard times to come to an end so that she can go back to living the life that she once took for granted. I feel bad for Anne when she is in this situation because I would probably go crazy having to be quiet and still for two years! I also feel bad for her when she is in this situation because she can't entertain herself in many ways besides reading and writing in her diary, plus, I don't think that I could live on the food that they ate.
           In conclusion, in the beginning of the story, Anne was having a hard time getting used to her new way of life in the annex, but towards the middle of the story, Anne has learned to accept her life in hiding, and prays for all of the Jews suffering to end soon. I hope that in the in the end of the book, Anne will look back on her days in hiding as an adventure rather than a punishment.

Response to "The Drummer Boy of Shiloh"

           In The Drummer Boy of Shiloh, by Ray Bradbury, how does Joby change over the course of the story? In the beginning of the story, Joby felt homesick and unconfident. Everyone has felt like this at some point in their lives, and there is often somebody who comes into our lives and makes us feel better. For example, maybe you got a bad grade on a test. You would probably pout for a while, and then your parents, sibling, or maybe even a friend makes us feel better. In The Drummer Boy of Shiloh, the General caused Joby's internal change and made him feel better.
           In the beginning of the story, Joby was unconfident and homesick. He was really missing his family. As was stated about Joby's thoughts in the story, "The boy felt his family move yet farther off in the dark, as if one of those great prarie-burning trains had chanted them away, never to return- leaving him with his drum which was worse than a toy in the game to be played tommorrow or someday much too soon." This basically means that he misses his family a lot, and that all that he has now is his drum, which-to him- is the worst possible outcome. He feels that once the war starts there is no turning back, and he will have nobody to turn to because he is the odd-man-out in the army. He is just the drummer boy. The boy without a shield or weapon and no form of protection.
           Joby really started to change when the General went over and spoke to him. The General opened up to him and said: "You want to cry some more, go on ahead. I did the same last night." This made Joby feel a little bit better because, of all the people, the tough, demanding General had opened up to him an admitted that he cried. This made him feel less alone and more emotionally stable knowing that he wasn't the only one who felt that way.
           Joby's confidence boosted when the General told him: "You are the heart of the army. Think about that. You are the heart of the army. Listen to me now." I think that instead of making Joby feel even more alienated from everybody else, it made him feel important. It made him feel like there was a reason for his presence. It made him feel special.
           The General caused Joby to realize what was really important at the time: sticking together to win the war. He also made Joby's confidence shoot up and took the fatherly position in a family to make Joby feel less homesick. The General made Joby realize that of everybody in the army, he was the most special, and that the key to happiness is confidence.

Theme in my Independent Reading Book: The Diary of Anne Frank

           In my independent reading book, The Diary of Anne Frank, by Anne Frank, the main theme is circulated around the Holocaust.  The main character, Anne, her family, and several other Jews are hiding in the attic crawl space of a friends' home.  They are hiding from the German Nazi's who are persecuting and murdering the Jews.  The Nazi soldiers would go into the homes of Jews uninvited and whisk them away to concentration camps to die of diseases and illnesses, to be withered away by the lack of food and drink, to be beaten to the point of death, and pass out from exaustion. 
           The reason that I chose to write about this theme instead of all of the other small themes, such as anti-semetism and learning about your true identity, in my book is because it effects the whole book and all of the events that occur in this book.  For example, the reason that the Jews hiding in the attack crawl space don't ever open their curtains or ever turn on the lights, is because they don't want to be caught by the anti-Jewish Nazi's, who will surely drag them all away to concentration camps.
           This book is very powerful to me.  As a Jew, I find it especially important to know the history of the Jewish people.  Although it is very sad, it is interesting to learn what happened to all of the people involved in the Holocaust, some of whom happen to be my ancestors. 
           I am really enjoying this book so far, and would highly recommend it to anybody who would like to learn a little bit about the history of the Jewish people, and to people who would just like a good read.  This book may even change your way of looking at the world.

Two Blogs That I Read and Responded To

                                                     
          I chose to read Sydney's and George's Blogs. Sydney read A Long Walk to Water, by Linda Sue Park. George read Cirque du Freak, by Darren Shan.
          I liked Sydney's blogpost because it was concise and straight to the point. I felt like I had read the book, even though I hadn't. I also liked how she sumarized the book first, and then stated her opinions on the characters and about the book in general. I found Sydney's style of writing interesting, too, because she made sure that all of her readers would understand what went on in the book that she read before she jumped straight to telling us her conclusions.
          I liked George's blogpost because it was very descriptive and it was a very brief summary of the entire book. I especially liked how in the end of his response, George told us how the main character changed over the course of the entire book. I think that it was great how he tracked the character change.
Good job with your blog posts George and Sydney!
:)

The Future of Us Reading Response

The Future of Us Reading Response

             In the book, The Future of Us, by Jay Asher and Carolyn Mackler, the two main characters find out their futures on a mysterious website known to them as “Facebook.” This was especially strange to them because nobody had ever heard of this website. In fact, it didn’t exist! A lot of people didn’t even have computers back in the year 1996!

            It all started with an average computer software disc. Emma and Josh had barely spoken to one another in months, but this all changed when Mrs. Templeton, (Josh’s mother), made Josh bring a computer software disc over to Emma’s house because Emma had just gotten a computer as a present from her father, who had just remarried. Sadly, the Templeton household didn’t have a computer.

            When Josh brings the disc over to Emma’s house, she invited him in and the two of them set up her computer together. Emma set up an email account for herself, and when she logged in she saw something strange listed in the “favorites” section of her email. “Facebook.” It said Facebook. What is Facebook!?! This is what Josh and Emma found out after they clicked on the link. They got to see their futures in fifteen years from then. At first the two of them thought it was a prank, but soon enough they found out that it wasn’t. When they looked at the photos that were posted on Emma’s future page, they saw a picture that was recently taken of her by the lake in their town. She went to her camera and found the film in the camera untouched and undeveloped. Then she started to realize that this really was her future. Emma looked at her page and hated her future almost instantaneously. Her future husband left and hadn’t returned for three days, and in the future, she was mentally ill! She searched other people’s futures, too, such as Josh and her friend Kellan. Josh was married to the prettiest, most popular girl in the grade ahead of him, was rich, and had children. Her friend Kellan is a struggling single mother to her fourteen year old daughter, Lindsay.

Emma didn’t like her future, so she decided to change it. She found her future husbands phone number in the phone book, and called him, pretending to be someone that he met at a party. He turned out to be a year older than her and went to her first choice school for college. She crossed that school off her list as soon as she found out.

The next time that she checked her Facebook page, she was married to some guy named Kevin Storm, and even though her future was changed, she was still unhappy with it. She didn’t like where she lived because it interfered with her future job. She was a marine biologist who was living in England because of Kevin’s job. When she changed her future, she also changed other people’s futures a little bit. Her current friend Josh wasn’t on her list of friends anymore, though he was still married to Sydney Mills, but he didn’t have the same children anymore. When Emma changed her future it changed who his kids were going to be.

            Emma changed her future multiple times, and this upset Josh because he felt that she shouldn’t be messing around with the future because it could greatly affect him or somebody else fifteen years down the road. Emma didn’t listen to Josh.

            Thankfully in the end of the book, Emma and Josh were unable to access Facebook through email anymore, so the future could turn out the way it was meant to be.